Cosima
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I am working on a book. I haven’t really written any thing yet but I have planed it out and I would loved your guy’s opinions on my timeline.
my book is a story about cats that live in three tribes. The mane character is a female brown seal point cat called Ivy. She is impulsive and not really confident but she is confident in battles and she likes the thrill of them but she knows that it is wrong so she hides it. she has a older sister called Wing and a friend called Ember that knows about herds but so far she has no other close friends. She is in love with a cat called breeze that is from a other tribe and like in the warriors that is not aloud.
the first few chapters will introduce the characters and ivy’s forbidden love and the tension between Ivy’s tribe and Breeze’s tribe.
then ivy’s tribe will do something that causes Breeze’s tribe to attack and in that battle Breeze gets killed by ivy and wing’s mentor and then Ivy attacks her mentor and accidentally kills her in a fit of anger (o i forgot to mention that ivy has times when her anger takes control of her) then she gets exiled and a cat called Aron finds her and he charms her into joining his tribe and since two cats she cared about died and she is not thinking straight she excepts. Aron’s tribe had been quiet and had stayed out of the other two tribe‘s conflict.
then it skips forward and you get to know the Aron is planning to take over his tribe and the other tribes and that Ivy is his mate and she is supporting this. After Aron takes over his tribe he plays the gentleman and asks her which of the other tribe she wants to take over first. She choose her original tribe to show him that she doesn’t care about them any more and he makes sure to capture her sister and friends with out hurting them but then he does something that makes her realize that he is actually evil. In the meantime Aron’s sister, blade gets close to Ivy while Ivy drifts away from Aron.
at some point blade and Ivy run away with wing and ember and they some how defeat Aron together.
other then that I haven’t can up with much but if I do write a other book then Ivy will have a son and he will cause trouble but I think I will only write one book.
What do you think? If you have any ideas to add to the story then please share them.
my book is a story about cats that live in three tribes. The mane character is a female brown seal point cat called Ivy. She is impulsive and not really confident but she is confident in battles and she likes the thrill of them but she knows that it is wrong so she hides it. she has a older sister called Wing and a friend called Ember that knows about herds but so far she has no other close friends. She is in love with a cat called breeze that is from a other tribe and like in the warriors that is not aloud.
the first few chapters will introduce the characters and ivy’s forbidden love and the tension between Ivy’s tribe and Breeze’s tribe.
then ivy’s tribe will do something that causes Breeze’s tribe to attack and in that battle Breeze gets killed by ivy and wing’s mentor and then Ivy attacks her mentor and accidentally kills her in a fit of anger (o i forgot to mention that ivy has times when her anger takes control of her) then she gets exiled and a cat called Aron finds her and he charms her into joining his tribe and since two cats she cared about died and she is not thinking straight she excepts. Aron’s tribe had been quiet and had stayed out of the other two tribe‘s conflict.
then it skips forward and you get to know the Aron is planning to take over his tribe and the other tribes and that Ivy is his mate and she is supporting this. After Aron takes over his tribe he plays the gentleman and asks her which of the other tribe she wants to take over first. She choose her original tribe to show him that she doesn’t care about them any more and he makes sure to capture her sister and friends with out hurting them but then he does something that makes her realize that he is actually evil. In the meantime Aron’s sister, blade gets close to Ivy while Ivy drifts away from Aron.
at some point blade and Ivy run away with wing and ember and they some how defeat Aron together.
other then that I haven’t can up with much but if I do write a other book then Ivy will have a son and he will cause trouble but I think I will only write one book.
What do you think? If you have any ideas to add to the story then please share them.
