Not too early for some points, however best critique will come from three pictures. One side, one front, and one top all posed. Taken straight on and in natural light (either outside or artificial close to daylight). The lil one is a bit over posed, if you've not looked on YouTube for posing Holland Lop help, suggest that. The back toes should line up with what is the knee (what I call it). It shouldn't be tucked up under touching the front feet. The front feet should be straight down under the eye, which they pretty well are. Having the hindquarters pushed too far forward makes them look undercut and off. Hopefully that helps some.
Heads are usually the thing that takes the most time. Will start into uglies soon, and won't come out until 5 or so months old. What you see as far as crown goes though, is what you will get. May grow into the ears a bit more, but since got a slipped crown will always look rather long and lack definition.