I think your yarn is nice, but I think the titles are more what should be in your tags. Also, photos are key to your sales. I don't think your photos are bad, but people like to see photo props and whatnots. It's a PITA, but I've gotten a lot more likes since I started using photo props and backdrops. Nothing fancy needed, I just use my wood pile or an old weathered bench for a backdrop and antlers, firewood or dried flowers as props. Another thing I would suggest is to run a search through Etsy and see if a search pertaining to the attributes of your yarn actually pulls up your yarn. If not, revamp your tags. If people can't find your yarn they'll never know it's there.
It does take a while to get going on Etsy, and patience helps. The more you put in your shop, and the better you fill out your 'tags' the easier it is to find in searches. Maybe that particular skein isn't what their looking for, but they check your shop anyway. Also, look at other shops selling similar items with success and see how they list their items and what the prices are. Angora is a hard one to price, as a lot of people either underprice theirs or act like it's gold, so keep it where youre comfortable. I based my prices off a local fiber artist's prices and so far many people have told me they think it's very reasonable for handspun.
It took me over 3 months to get my first sale when I was on it years ago, but since starting up again this year, revamping my shop, photos, and keeping my descriptions short sweet and to the point but still slightly personal, I made 4 sales since I opened the shop again in January. Not much, but it's $200 I wouldn't have had otherwise. I personally think my problem is that everyone else is selling angora as 50g or 100 yard skeins, and mine is in batch quantity, so it'scloser to 200+ yards per skein. Most people like smaller amounts of Angora for baby hats and faux fur trims, so I am going to be spending some time in a The next few weeks to break down my skeins to smaller sizes. I get a lot of likes, so I wonder if this wouldn't help sales. As far as reviews, I bribe people. You can write coupon codes, so I offer to send them a coupon code for 10% off their next order if they leave a review. All three sales since I started the coupon have left wonderful reviews.
That's just my suggestions, anywho.
