I hate saying but in all honesty low long shoulders is probably one of the top things next to poor HQ to cull for. Shoulders are a really hard fix if they are really long and low, BUT it depends on severity. If I had a doe with a touch too long but has amazing type, then I will keep her and breed her to a beefy shoulder buck. I like the one on top better than the one on bottom. The one on bottom isn't nice and rounded ( but she also isn't posed right) while the other seems a lot beefer, rounder overall and more eye pleasing.
This seems to only works well with linebred rabbits though. All my rabbits come from the same tree essentially, so it's easy to fix certain traits...when you bring in outside lines, it can be a crapshoot at that point because it's a lot of new genetic material.
When I stack my rabbits properly, I step back and just look at them and take in their balance (or lack of) and see if they can hold it. When they are built the right way, you can stand as a judge does, and take in the whole rabbit.
and the reason some breeders might look at you funny about charlies because they are usually culled from the nesting box right away or culled as pets with major breeders. Breeders rather worked with the nicely typed, correctly colored ones than take a chance with a charlie that they can't do much with. They also don't want to lead to the pattern being to light It depends on the breeder.
Show your doe and get some comments as always. We are not pros right off the back